The Warm Rain Comes — trying something new

The first go is bad. That is stated plainly and then not made into a crisis, because at six that is the useful shape for this to have.

The Starlit Forest
Written for
Ages 6–7
Read aloud in
6 minutes
Set in
The Starlit Forest
About
Trying again
Along for the walk
River

The Warm Rain Comes

Ash ran their fingers along the bark, where the moss grew thick and cool. The air had turned warm, warmer than night air should be. River sat up on the root beside them, whiskers twitching. Far off, thunder rolled like a barrel down a hill. Then the rain came, soft and warm, pattering on every leaf. Ash held out their hands and laughed. The drops felt like bathwater. All around, the forest made room for it. Moths folded themselves under the broad leaves. A deer stepped in beneath the pines. The lanterns of light between the branches blurred and swam.

Ash went to look at the mossy bank under the old beech. Tiny lights lived there, small as grass seeds, green and steady, and on most nights the moss glowed like a sleeping town. Tonight the slope above it had turned into a stream. Brown water slid down through the leaf litter, fast and busy, heading straight for the moss. One by one, the little lights were going out. River slipped off the root and stood in the running water, pale muzzle dripping. Ash crouched. The rain was warm on the back of their neck. "We can move it," Ash said.

Ash gathered handfuls of wet leaves and pressed them into the stream's path. It made a low wall, dark and shining. For three breaths the water piled up behind it. Then it found the gaps and slid through, quick as a thread. Ash pressed harder. The leaves went slick and flat and floated away downhill, one after another, like little boats. River watched them go. Rain ran off Ash's chin, warm as tea left out on a step. Ash wiped their hands on their knees. Nothing was ruined. Nothing was lost. They just had to begin again.

Next, Ash scooped up mud, cold and heavy, and built a bank across the flow. It held for a moment. Then the water leaned on it, and the whole bank slumped sideways with a soft gulp. Ash sat back on their heels and let out a long breath. Under the beech, the moss had gone dark and quiet. "Try it again, a little slower," Ash said. River pressed a wet paw against their knee. The rain kept falling, warm and patient, and the forest went on making room for it, leaf by leaf, branch by branch.

Ash sat still and watched the water instead of fighting it. It did not want to stop. It wanted to go. Downhill, past the beech roots, stood an old stump with a hollow top, and River was already there, swimming slow circles in the brown pool inside it. The stump could hold a great deal of water. It was only a few steps from the stream. Ash stood up. Their fingers were pruney and warm. Between the stream and the stump lay a shallow groove in the ground, half full of leaves, waiting like an unswept path.

Ash began at the stump and worked backward. One stick laid along the groove. Then a stone to hold the stick. Then a handful of leaves pressed into the crack between them. The first stick rolled. Ash set it again, deeper. "Try it again, a little slower," Ash whispered. River dug out the old leaves ahead of them, paws flicking, making the path wide and clean. Stick, stone, leaves. Stick, stone, leaves. Ash's arms ached in a good way. The rain drummed on their shoulders, and steam rose off the warm forest floor in soft grey ribbons.

At last Ash cut the last scoop of mud away and let the stream in. The water paused, turned, and ran along the new path. It chuckled over the sticks. It poured into the stump and filled it slowly to the brim. The mossy bank under the beech began to drip instead of flood. Ash lay down beside it with their cheek in the wet moss. One green light came back on. Then four. Then too many to count, warm and small, right against Ash's nose. River floated in the full stump with their whiskers above the water.

The rain thinned to a hush. Ash waded into the shallow pool at the stump's foot, where the water was warm as a held hand, and lay back. River swam under their shoulder and towed them, slow and steady, around the bright moss and up to the soft bank. Ash's eyes closed somewhere along the way. "Try it again, a little slower," they murmured, to nobody, to the rain. River nosed them gently onto the moss and curled against their side. Above them the branches dripped. Below them the little lights glowed on, green and warm and patient, all night long.

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