Shift Along, There's Room — 8 year olds

Eight-year-olds can hold a longer sentence and a slower middle. This one takes its time getting into the forest and does not rush coming out.

Dinosaur Valley
Written for
Ages 8–9
Read aloud in
7 minutes
Set in
Dinosaur Valley
Along for the walk
Plum

Shift Along, There's Room

Lior carried the flat stone up the fern path with both hands, because it was still hot from the afternoon. Plum rode on their shoulder, heavy lids half down, swaying with each step. The stone had been lying in the open all day, soaking up the sun, and now it held that heat the way bread holds it. Lior meant to set it under the big tree fern, where Plum liked to stand, because Plum's feet were always cold and she never said so. The valley smelled of wet green things. Somewhere below, a long grey neck moved through the ferns without hurrying anyone. Lior walked slower, so the stone would not cool too fast.

The light changed before the rain did. Lior felt it on their arms first, a coolness sliding down off the ridge, and then the ferns began to tip and nod all together. Plum lifted both tufted brows. Over the far slope hung a soft grey curtain, slanting, coming on at a walking pace. The first drops landed warm. That always surprised Lior. Warm rain in a warm valley, fat drops that smacked the broad leaves and bounced. The dust on the path went dark in spots, then everywhere at once. Lior tucked the stone against their chest, where their shirt could keep the heat in a little longer, and ran for the great tree fern.

Under the tree fern it was dim and green and already crowded. Two ridge-backed grazers stood shoulder to shoulder, steaming gently. A thin-legged runner had folded itself into the roots. Three hatchlings, each the size of a loaf, pressed into the dry hollow at the trunk, and they were shivering in the way small things do. Lior stopped at the edge of the dry ring, rain running off their hair. Plum shook out her wings once. Then one of the big grazers took a slow step sideways, and another, and a gap opened. "Shift along," said Lior, stepping in. "There's room for one more." The rain came down harder behind them, warm as bathwater.

Lior set the stone in the dry hollow and sat beside it, and Plum hopped down and stood on it with her eyes shut. Heat came up through her feet and she made a low, pleased sound, almost a purr, which owls are not supposed to make. The hatchlings noticed. They watched the stone the way everyone watches a fire. Lior waited. Then Plum sidestepped to the stone's rim, leaving the middle bare, and the three of them crowded on, feet overlapping, tails hanging off. "Shift along," Lior said again, quieter. "There's room for one more." Plum balanced on the edge, one ear of feathers flat with rain, and did not complain.

A frond above them had split, and a thread of rain had found the split. It fell in a steady cold line onto the back of the smallest hatchling, who kept flinching and could not work out why. Lior watched the drip for a while, following it up with their eyes. Then they stood, reached, and bent a lower frond across the gap, hooking its stem into the knuckle of a root so it held. The drip struck the new leaf and ran off down the outside instead. The hatchling stopped flinching. It did not look up. Lior sat back down with wet sleeves and let the warmth of the hollow come back around them.

The rain settled into its long middle part, the part with no hurry in it. Steam lifted off the grazers' backs and hung under the fern like a low ceiling. Lior counted drips off the leaf edge and lost count twice. The air was thick and warm and smelled of crushed stems. Plum's eyes closed all the way. Nobody pushed. The thin-legged runner uncurled a little and nobody minded. Lior leaned against a root that fitted the shape of their back, holding one hand flat against the stone, feeling it give up its heat a degree at a time, slow and generous, until it was only as warm as skin.

The rain stopped the way it had started, without announcing it. Light came back under the fern in long yellow bars. The grazers moved off, one after another, leaving the hollow suddenly wide. The hatchlings tumbled out into the wet and went looking for their mother, who was already coming, enormous and unbothered. Lior picked up the stone. It was cool now, and heavier for being cool. Plum climbed to their shoulder. All down the path the great round footprints had filled with rain, and each one held a piece of sky. "Shift along," Lior whispered to Plum, moving her gently off their collar. "There's room for one more."

They walked home in the blue part of the evening, past print after print, each brim-full and still trembling. Lior crouched at the last one and watched. The water jumped a little, then less, then not at all, and the whole circle went smooth as a held breath. One early star stood in it, upside down and perfectly clear. Lior put the stone down at the edge of the moss where the morning sun would find it again. Plum tucked her beak into her chest. The valley ticked and dripped and cooled around them, and in every footprint along the path the water finished moving and lay still, holding the sky without spilling a drop.

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