The Shelf by the Well — 5 year olds

Five-year-olds ask what happens next, so this one keeps answering. Nine pages, about six minutes, and no peril anywhere in it.

Snow Village
Written for
Ages 4–5
Read aloud in
6 minutes
Set in
Snow Village
Along for the walk
Wisp

The Shelf by the Well

Noor went down the lane with something round inside her mitten. Squeak, squeak, said the snow under her boots. Wisp drifted just ahead, glowing soft as a lit window. The round thing was a pinecone. Noor had tied a red thread around it and hung three tiny bells from the thread. It rang when she swung her arm. Snow came down slow and quiet. Wisp glowed a little brighter, and Noor walked a little faster.

At the end of the lane stood the old well, and beside it, a shelf. The shelf had a small wooden roof to keep the snow off. A lantern hung above it, burning low and orange. Everyone in the village knew what the shelf was for. Leave one thing, take one thing. Noor climbed onto the flat stone so she could see the whole shelf properly. Wisp floated up beside her cheek and lit the dark corner.

There was a wooden spoon with a bird carved on the handle. There was a blue button as big as a coin. There was a ball of grey wool and a smooth striped stone. And at the back, half hidden, there was a star made of glass. It was no bigger than a plum. When Wisp glowed, the star filled up with light and spilled it on the wood. Noor breathed out. Squeak, squeak, went her boots on the stone.

She picked the star up. It was cold and lighter than she expected. Then she looked down at the pinecone in her other mitten, with its red thread and its three small bells. She had made that. She had tied every knot herself. For a moment she held one thing in each hand and did not move at all. Snow landed on her hood. Wisp waited beside her, glowing, saying nothing, the way Wisp always did.

Noor set the pinecone down in the middle of the shelf, where anyone would see it. She turned it so the bells hung free. Then she slid the glass star deep into her mitten and closed her fingers round it. Leave one thing, take one thing. Wisp glowed brighter, gold at the edges. Noor climbed back down off the stone. The lantern swung above the shelf and made the snow look like it was moving.

Squeak, squeak, squeak, all the way back up the lane. Noor wondered who would come to the well next. An old man with cold hands. A girl with a sled. Someone who liked bells. She imagined them lifting her pinecone and hearing that small sound and smiling in the dark. The thought made her warm inside her coat. Wisp drifted along the fence posts, lighting each one, then the next, then the next.

Halfway home, Noor stopped. In a low window, behind a fog of breath, someone was hanging something on a hook. A pinecone with a red thread. Three small bells. Noor did not knock. She stood in the snow and watched the bells turn slowly in the warm yellow room. Then she went on, quiet, with the star in her mitten. Wisp dimmed politely as they passed, so no one inside would look up.

At home, Noor hung the glass star in her own window, on the nail where nothing had hung before. The lamp was behind her, so the star lit up like a small piece of the lantern by the well. She got into bed and watched it. Snow kept coming down and muffled every sound in the village. Wisp settled on the pillow beside her, round and soft and bright. Leave one thing, take one thing, Noor said, almost asleep.

The star turned a little on its thread. Somewhere down the lane, three bells rang in a warm room, too far away to hear. Noor's eyes closed. Wisp glowed low, then lower, the way a coal goes quiet in the grate. The window went grey. The snow kept falling on the shelf and the well and the whole sleeping village. The last light in the room faded out, and there was only the dark and the soft, soft snow.

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